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<p><span style="color: #262626;">中式英语（Chinglish）指带有汉语词汇、语法、表达习惯的英语，是一种具有中国特色的语言。</span></p> <div data-page-id="FINTd0Cgmo66kJxbyitc7vbInzf" data-docx-has-block-data="true"> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Ge8Dd9uEDoDD15xIGawcU2RDnve"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-LxXqdsblHoV9coxUvwDc6Jrenle"><span style="color: #262626;">在使用英语时，因受汉语思维方式或文化的影响而拼造出不符合英语表达习惯的，具有中国特征的英语。这是中国人在学习英语过程中出现的，是必然的一种语言现象。本文总结了几种常见中式英语（Chinglish）的特点，从而帮助读者能写出更加规范和正宗的英语。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-LxXqdsblHoV9coxUvwDc6Jrenle"><span style="color: #ffffff;"> </span></div> <h1 class="heading-7 ace-line old-record-id-OSShdIT5Oo4N9yxaQADcZNEWnOu"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>Part One: 词汇</strong></span></h1> <div class="heading-7 ace-line old-record-id-OSShdIT5Oo4N9yxaQADcZNEWnOu"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BSyuduljRo0iCXxQnjDcdUbdneh"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>核心要义</strong>：“如果一个词在句子中没有发挥任何作用，那它就应该被删掉”。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BSyuduljRo0iCXxQnjDcdUbdneh"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-LoKqdSYtUoNOJPxwcNsc55mUngf"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">名词</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-LoKqdSYtUoNOJPxwcNsc55mUngf"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>1、形容词+名词</strong>，有时候可以用单个名词表达；</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Competitive <strong>advantages</strong> After: Competitiveness</span></div> <p><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></p> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before：<strong>shinning points </strong>After：strengths</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>2、抽象名词</strong>通常是不必要的，要多加观察和思考；</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before：Consumption <strong>pattern </strong>After: Consumption 消费（模式）</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: assignment about the<strong> ethics case </strong>After: assignment on <strong>ethics </strong>道德伦理（情况）</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">句子中其他成分里已经<strong>包括了一个名词的含义</strong>，这个名词就是多余的;</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Driven by the curiosity <strong>of finding the answers</strong>. After: Driven by curiosity</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">注意 some<strong> noun of noun</strong> 这种结构, 可以直接noun+noun</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: the structure of each language After： language structure</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: refer to <strong>materials of the company </strong>After: refer to the company’s materials</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: behavioural patterns of human beings After: human beings’ behavioural patterns</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <p><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>3、地道用词</strong></span></p> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before：research<strong> attitude </strong> After：research mindset</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: past twenty years After: last two decades</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: learning enthusiasm After: aptitude</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-DRhvdkzb7ouX12xt4XkcFtZSntg"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>动词</strong></span></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-DRhvdkzb7ouX12xt4XkcFtZSntg"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>1、万能动词 + 名词</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FA2odwqekoHdNMxuar5cXXn3n6b"><span style="color: #262626;">此处动词之所以多余是因为他们没能承担「相应的动作」，反而这种责任是由后面名词完成的，因此不如直接把后面的<strong>名词给动词化</strong>。这些动词是易错对象：make，have，give，achieve，conduct, carry out；</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FA2odwqekoHdNMxuar5cXXn3n6b"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before：Tang Yubing prefers to<strong> make exhaustive analysis</strong> research from different angles.</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OE88dHkVEoxa38x1QtjcXF59nTc"><span style="color: #262626;">After：Tang Yubing prefers to<strong> exhaustively analyze</strong> research from different angles.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OE88dHkVEoxa38x1QtjcXF59nTc"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>2、多余动词+多余名词（+第三个词）</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-CoAddO8kpovUKlxW61DcMnMInfc"><span style="color: #262626;">此时，不仅动词没能表达特定含义，连后面的名词也放弃治疗了，导致这一个动词和一个名词表达的含义都十分模糊。那么，只能<strong>由第三个词</strong>来承担表示确切含义的责任。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-CoAddO8kpovUKlxW61DcMnMInfc"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: reach the goal of modernization After: to modernize</span></div> <p><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></p> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>3、动词+动词可以直接动词替换</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-I7ytdvId4oTa8QxDvZYcOX9Inef"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>Before: </strong>Another unforgettable experience <strong>let me see </strong>the pivotal role of in-depth study of Chinese culture.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-I7ytdvId4oTa8QxDvZYcOX9Inef"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-AqXbdVgVnoVLoKxwyFScD7Ainjf"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong> After: </strong>Another unforgettable experience<strong> exposed </strong>me to the pivotal role of in-depth study of Chinese culture.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-AqXbdVgVnoVLoKxwyFScD7Ainjf"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>4、地道用词</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before：<strong>Study </strong>management After：Major in management</span></div> <p><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></p> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before：<strong>see </strong>a bigger world After：discover a bigger world</span></div> <p><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></p> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before:<strong> add </strong>managerial knowledge After:<strong> </strong><strong>improve</strong> managerial knowledge</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: I<strong> feel </strong>delighted to recommend Miss LI After: I <strong>am</strong> delighted to recommend Miss LI</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: I was pleased to<strong> know </strong>that Li <strong> </strong> After: I was pleased to <strong>discover</strong> that Li<strong> </strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-GhsNdI8cco9B2exGnxCcH3hvneb"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">修饰词</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-GhsNdI8cco9B2exGnxCcH3hvneb"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>1、冗余修饰词</strong> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">某些修饰词的含义已经<strong>蕴含于被修饰词</strong>中</span></div> <div> </div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">His <strong>own</strong> opinions (如果不是用于特别强调是「他」的，就是多余的)</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">His <strong>individual</strong> views</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>valuable</strong> asset (a person or thing that is <strong>valuable </strong>or useful to somebody/something)</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">my <strong>deeper </strong>exploration (不用比较级的情况下是可接受的)</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ESsvdtdo0o2f6pxKNYDcjE8pnbv"><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>时间副词</strong>：有些动词已经暗含时间状态了</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ESsvdtdo0o2f6pxKNYDcjE8pnbv"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>Previously</strong>...we used to</span></div> <p><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></p> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>2、程度词往往会在情绪、主动性上使用过度</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">her <strong>stunning </strong>success</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>Heated </strong>debate</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: extremely important After: essential</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: absolutely want to After: were determined to</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: after <strong>actively</strong> communicating with the other students in class <strong>discussions</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ZWt8dapg0of1scxLX8UcvhORnEh"><span style="color: #262626;">After: after lively discussions with his classmates</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ZWt8dapg0of1scxLX8UcvhORnEh"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">to <strong>successfully </strong>accomplish</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">felt <strong>very </strong>honoured</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">It is <strong>quite </strong>important to ....</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">The impact will be <strong>quite </strong>huge</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-SOyId27wkobNRIxFIZ3cBlTknZb"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">代词</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-SOyId27wkobNRIxFIZ3cBlTknZb"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BHGWdVnpBogDTzx1WEVcUFZTn7e"><span style="color: #262626;">中式英语中代词也是最容易被用错的一类词。汉语里代词的划分其实不如英语多，因此，英语中有些代词在汉语中并没有明确的翻译方法，Chinglish中就会出现很多代词使用不正确的现象。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BHGWdVnpBogDTzx1WEVcUFZTn7e"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OshJd4ju1oYNkxxiI4VcVbzOnRb"><span style="color: #262626;">但代词的正确用法其实也非常简单，一言以蔽之就是：每个代词必须指向一个先行词，即代词是指代的谁。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OshJd4ju1oYNkxxiI4VcVbzOnRb"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-QEMYdnJkloHeI3xe7n5cIGuGnMg"><span style="color: #262626;">每个代词所替代的，就是那个先行词了。而先行词的正确用法为：要被明确写出、无二义、与代词近、语法正确。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-QEMYdnJkloHeI3xe7n5cIGuGnMg"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: I will take advantage of your well-designed modules, especially <strong>those </strong>combine music, film, and audio technologies closely, such as Creating with Technology, Sound Shaping Design, Audiovisual Composition, Field recording etc. (those后面接的是一个句子，缺少关系代词）</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-B68Zdf363oYId0x1AdPc1KMmnwb"><span style="color: #262626;">After: I will take advantage of your well-designed modules, especially <strong>those that </strong>combine music, film, and audio technologies closely, such as Creating with Technology, Sound Shaping Design, and Audiovisual Composition, Field recording etc.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-B68Zdf363oYId0x1AdPc1KMmnwb"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Besides, Reid School of Music is equipped with Alison House, Reid Studio, two 360 audio mixing spaces and other advanced hardware and software equipment, <strong>which </strong>are conducive to sound studies. (指代不明）</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OgfLdCmMBo7wHzxNI3Bc0qGmn7b"><span style="color: #262626;">After: The Reid School of Music is equipped with Alison House, Reid Studio, two 360 audio mixing spaces and other advanced hardware and software equipment, <strong>all of which</strong> will be assets to my studies.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OgfLdCmMBo7wHzxNI3Bc0qGmn7b"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-KDOEducvXo4Cskx5inncYsRZnYd"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">冗余双生词</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-KDOEducvXo4Cskx5inncYsRZnYd"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-TagTdG1v4oCWrMxGRz2clJxvnmP"><span style="color: #262626;">两个含义相同的词并列使用，虽在中文中能加强语气避免歧义，但英语中完全是不必要的。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-TagTdG1v4oCWrMxGRz2clJxvnmP"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">因此，要注意第二个词是否真的补充了第一个词的含义，以及只有一个词是否就能恰当地表达原文意思，再对这类错误进行甄别。</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>如何消除冗余</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-PTxmdsVsdoZHJSxRfyWcv8tWnDh"><span style="color: #262626;">最简单的方法是：删去其中一个，或选另外一个词替换这俩词。若这种方法不能达到等价替代的效果，则对原有表达进行扩充，使其含义更精确。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-PTxmdsVsdoZHJSxRfyWcv8tWnDh"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>help and assistance</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">in a clear <strong>logic and rigorous </strong>structure</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">showed their <strong>doubt and objection</strong> to my decision</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"><strong>preciseness and rigor</strong></span></div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-ZCPSdPJN0oQb1QxbdwmcuNAfntd" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{"items":[{"uuid":"3e577f75-3d6f-406f-9ed7-f8d11893210d","height":618,"width":1200,"currHeight":618,"currWidth":1200,"natrualHeight":618,"natrualWidth":1200,"pluginName":"imageUpload","scale":1,"src":"https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FK3YXbIXcJoEZudxBz6Bccma4nVe%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16","file_token":"K3YXbIXcJoEZudxBz6Bccma4nVe","image_type":"image/png","size":103837,"comments":[]}]}"><span style="color: #262626;"> <img style="display: block; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1714381175284/1714381175284.png" width="484" height="249" /></span></div> <div class="heading-7 ace-line old-record-id-EbDqdTuyYoBrQExlCTQcSu0rnwg"><span style="color: #ffffff;"> </span></div> <h1 class="heading-7 ace-line old-record-id-EbDqdTuyYoBrQExlCTQcSu0rnwg"><span style="color: #ffffff;"><strong>Part Two: 句子</strong></span></h1> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-Er12dg6F3oGyj1xxcjhc0Pb4nUf"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-Er12dg6F3oGyj1xxcjhc0Pb4nUf"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">从句赘余</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-Er12dg6F3oGyj1xxcjhc0Pb4nUf"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-HgT7db4O4ouPmdxem8WcLA9rn9d"><span style="color: #262626;">在英文中，一句话能讲清楚的尽量不要借助从句让中心思想变得模糊不清。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-HgT7db4O4ouPmdxem8WcLA9rn9d"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-S4TxdNSGooh1FEx6gGWc9R05nWc"><span style="color: #262626;">处理方法：针对冗长的句子，可以分成简单句或者非谓语动词的形式。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-S4TxdNSGooh1FEx6gGWc9R05nWc"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Driven by my professional aspirations, I set my goal of studying economics at the postgraduate courses, <strong>for which I have made various preparations.</strong></span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-JwxUdxBG8o90HKxqg7xcEzDKnmf"><span style="color: #262626;">After: Driven by my professional aspirations,<strong> I have made great efforts to achieve my goal of </strong>studying economics at postgraduate level.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OnzGdk3meoUfKRxuyWfcqEhEnUd"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OnzGdk3meoUfKRxuyWfcqEhEnUd"><span style="color: #262626;">「make preparations」就是为了获得研究生学习的资格，和「goal」表意一致可以合并，无需从句</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-OnzGdk3meoUfKRxuyWfcqEhEnUd"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Among all subjects,<strong> I showed a preference for English, which</strong> is also the subject I am best at and most willing to spend time on.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-IzMidFMiqo85Kvx74xkc3GBGnzh"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-IzMidFMiqo85Kvx74xkc3GBGnzh"><span style="color: #262626;">After: During my school years,<strong> </strong><strong>I always enjoyed and excelled at</strong> studying English.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SQ1PdsPiVoMFk2xw96Ac1VxcnMh"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SQ1PdsPiVoMFk2xw96Ac1VxcnMh"><span style="color: #262626;">受「中式表达」的影响，把「喜欢和擅长」英语讲的太复杂了</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-SQ1PdsPiVoMFk2xw96Ac1VxcnMh"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: Despite<strong> the fact that </strong>my major at that time was Management of Cultural Industries, I did not want my exploration in finance to just stop there.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-S66TdzJMeoAIf3xxMOccfzOZn5f"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-S66TdzJMeoAIf3xxMOccfzOZn5f"><span style="color: #262626;">After: Despite my major at the time being Management of Cultural Industries, I did not want my exploration of finance to just stop there.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-HVoZdPYu6ohjzQxEU9VcO9vunIh"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-HVoZdPYu6ohjzQxEU9VcO9vunIh"><span style="color: #262626;">「despite+名词」完全ok</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-HVoZdPYu6ohjzQxEU9VcO9vunIh"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: …, my independent research and technical leadership skills were also greatly strengthened<strong>, which</strong> gave me the confidence to take harder challenges in the postgraduate period. (一句话60个词)</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-UL6TduyjIorcCcxoQkZcfPW5n9d"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-UL6TduyjIorcCcxoQkZcfPW5n9d"><span style="color: #262626;">After: …, my independent research and technical leadership skills were also greatly strengthened. <strong>These experiences</strong> have given me the confidence to take on harder challenges in the postgraduate period.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FUZKdfGTroUIobxBq8ccwBUnn1d"> </div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FUZKdfGTroUIobxBq8ccwBUnn1d"><span style="color: #262626;">通过拆成两个简单句，分别突出个人技能和它们对深造的帮助。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-FUZKdfGTroUIobxBq8ccwBUnn1d"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="image-uploaded gallery old-record-id-UuVLdBmNso9suXxXcbmcGKrDnPF" data-type="image" data-ace-gallery-json="{"items":[{"uuid":"8acb8d1c-3d72-435d-8037-6e317149d282","height":536,"width":760,"currHeight":536,"currWidth":760,"natrualHeight":536,"natrualWidth":760,"pluginName":"imageUpload","scale":1,"src":"https%3A%2F%2Finternal-api-drive-stream.feishu.cn%2Fspace%2Fapi%2Fbox%2Fstream%2Fdownload%2Fpreview%2FGcLWbc4nnoUEpqxXGUscdpX9nVf%2F%3Fpreview_type%3D16","file_token":"GcLWbc4nnoUEpqxXGUscdpX9nVf","image_type":"image/png","size":284800,"comments":[]}]}"><span style="color: #262626;"><img style="display: block; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1714381120260/1714381120260.png" width="467" height="330" /></span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-BNoxdQOFMoYjlvx1sCOciWGCnnh"> <div class="heading-8"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <h2 class="heading-8"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">平行结构</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8"> </div> <div class="heading-8"><span style="color: #262626;">其实就是那些最常见的 and/or 连接两个从句的结构。而使用这种「排比」方法时，需要保证几部分都具有相同的语法成分（跟对对联、写诗一样）。</span></div> <div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-X54ddTDKyoLIhYx4Wh9c5AglnMh"> </div> </div> </div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: I have observed his diligence and intelligence, and been sure that he would be a qualified candidate for your program. （前后不对称）</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-NtupdHY6kotx6rxf2EMc89R3nYc"><span style="color: #262626;">After: The diligence and intelligence he displayed during his time as my colleague makes him an excellently qualified candidate for your program。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-NtupdHY6kotx6rxf2EMc89R3nYc"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-THCudANdFoyncjxF8D4cxU7onAh"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">逻辑连接</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-THCudANdFoyncjxF8D4cxU7onAh"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-NgwGd46cqotL6Ox25bxc1zsUnJe"><span style="color: #262626;">语句成分之间的连接（如also, in addition）在汉语中其实经常被忽略，去掉这些逻辑连接成分可能在汉语中无足轻重，但许多时候，这些成分往往是英语中比较关键的地方。英语中这些成分一定要「显式」地写出来。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-NgwGd46cqotL6Ox25bxc1zsUnJe"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: During our contact, I have been fully convinced of her personal quality and ability,<strong> which I believe </strong>will make her a deserving candidate for you.</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Hxk3dUOiXojA6ixl9FPc1tBxnzf"><span style="color: #262626;">After: During the time I have known Yanying, I have always been impressed by both her personal and professional qualities, <strong>therefore I believe</strong> she is a deserving candidate for your master’s program.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Hxk3dUOiXojA6ixl9FPc1tBxnzf"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <h2 class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-U6HMdaoIkoPHmExF6d1cSofqnEf"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">开篇太虚</span></strong></h2> <div class="heading-8 ace-line old-record-id-U6HMdaoIkoPHmExF6d1cSofqnEf"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-EnysdZQFeoCEx5x0GGdcZRSknVU"><span style="color: #262626;">汉语通常不把主要观点放在句子开头，而是把写作目的、地点、原因、事例或现状放在主题句，作为引言。但是这将削弱主要观点的重要性，使得读者认为作者没有直接切题。因此，主要的观点一定要将其放在句子的最开始部分，其后再陈述地点、原因等。</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-EnysdZQFeoCEx5x0GGdcZRSknVU"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;">Before: <strong>To be specific, being interested in sound design,</strong> I hope to pursue further studies in this domain to prepare myself for my future career path.</span></div> <div><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-T52ZdxmE8oPUSDxyo3ycf8Benoh"><span style="color: #262626;">After: I also hope to pursue further studies in order to prepare myself for my future career path.</span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-DsG5dNJRdoiowOxRnERcn2FDn1f"><span style="color: #262626;"> </span></div> <div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-ABBCddJ3ooDJsLxlH4YcXH3WnIb"><span style="color: #262626;">总而言之，中式英语通常因受到汉语的影响，导致在单词选择、句子结构和表达方式上与英语习惯不符。本文从词汇和句子两部分分析了中式英语的常见错误，并提供了改正后的例子。旨在帮助读者通过识别和改正中式英语的特点，提升英语写作的规范性和地道性。</span></div> </div> <div class="qrcode-content-wrapper" contenteditable="false"> <div style="position: absolute; 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