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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-WsPVdrRKqoymAvxGzzzc8lTnnIb" style="text-align: justify;">H同学和指南者相识于2023年9月初，彼时她正忙于日常工作，在新东方担任数学老师。由于有了更明确的就业发展方向，所以找到我们进行海外研究生的申请。打算进一步学习与实践，提升自己从而更好地服务于未来的职业发展目标。</div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-XHo4dfAscoAKhkx3eLQc6V5Vn6f" style="text-align: justify;">结合H同学的<strong>本科背景经历分析</strong>，硬件条件相对来说不占据很强的竞争力优势，软件方面核心主要是围绕本科专业参与的一些<strong>项目经历</strong>。最终综合考虑了H同学的就业发展方向和自身背景条件，在专业方向上敲定了<strong>工业工程和金融</strong>方向。在学校选择上，我们按照梯度敲定了<strong>IC+南安+港五新二</strong>的申请院校组合，并结合我们对往年拒录数据的分析和整体申请规律的把握，选择了适配的工业工程和金融方向的专业。</div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Bv39dMJkRoJyqSxHkAgcqWLDnzg" style="text-align: justify;">考虑到H同学申请专业的<strong>文书适配度</strong>，结合多方面进行了文书创作。以参加<strong>摇篮杯比赛的项目经历</strong>展开，通过挖掘H同学在负责前期试验和商业计划书中融资需求、风险及策略部分撰写内容中的创新点和想法以及所面临的挑战，认识到将工业固体废物转化为建筑材料并减少初级资源的开采和生产成本，实现可持续发展的可行性等多方面进行创作。同时为了增加H同学软件上的核心竞争力，综合考虑H同学本科的背景，额外帮H同学补充了能够体现<strong>数据分析和决策能力</strong>的实习经历。另外和H同学初步沟通过程中有了解到，H同学对于择校原因这块有明确的写作思路，我们遵循H同学的思路，将该同学未来的职业蓝图和申请专业的核心课程紧密结合，在展现其清晰的职业发展规划的同时，增强体现了H同学对于对应项目的熟识程度。</div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-UU44dbURIoQ0lFx7KiLcpspKn3V" style="text-align: justify;">由于H同学需要利用工作外为数不多的时间确认文书，我们在11月下旬先敲定好了HKU和IC的文书，投递申请。在11月底敲定好剩余专业的所有文书，将申请投递。</div>
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<h1 class="heading-2 ace-line old-record-id-CKNOdiThVoJQcyxwscCc29VHnfc" style="text-align: justify;"><strong><span style="color: #ffffff;">小小插曲，终收获IC offer</span></strong></h1>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-Ub7fdSFJko0MZhxTUZYcWLa0ndf" style="text-align: justify;">H同学在投递IC MSc Metals and Energy Finance申请后的<strong>2周内</strong>就收到了项目组发来的面试邀约。我们也及时给H同学提供了面试建议的复习范围和对应面经，并安排了单人模拟面试以应对正式的面试。H同学面试准备的很充分，整体面试进行的非常顺利。在面试结束后的<strong>第三天</strong>就收到了IC的录取。</div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-F5j4doyNYoFwLuxaWmecxKcJnZg" style="text-align: justify;">这中间还有个小插曲，IC 录取con了H同学的GPA需要达到<strong>85+</strong>，但由于H同学已经<strong>毕业2年</strong>确实在硬件GPA上无法再做提升。了解情况后，我们也是及时协助H同学拟定英文邮件说明真实情况，强调了专业课成绩的优势进行argue，最终在焦急等待了一周后，收获了无条件录取。</div>
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<div class="ace-line ace-line old-record-id-NYGSd9wt3oHrhOxOSqpcJKdRn5c" style="text-align: justify;">就此H同学的申请季已经提前结束了，首枚offer就收到了IC的录取。衷心祝愿H同学在IC的求学之旅中取得丰硕的成果，收获宝贵的人脉和经历。在留学生活中一帆风顺，开启新的人生篇章！</div>
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