<p style="text-align: justify;"><img style="width: 808px; height: 61px; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto; float: none;" src="https://info.compassedu.hk/sucai/content/1682683030812/1682683030812.png" width="808" height="61" /></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><a href="https://www.compassedu.hk/adviser_16451_1" target="_blank" rel="noopener"><span style="text-decoration: underline; color: #1890ff;">刘泽安</span></a></p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="h6">简介：2022年度&ldquo;创意先锋奖&rdquo;，专注CS、EE等工科文书写作，致力于提供学员需求导向的个性化文书服务，希望用认真负责的态度助力实现每一个留学梦想，已帮助多名学员斩获上百枚世界顶尖名校offer</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">科研经历是个人陈述的一大重点，许多同学都会有类似的困扰：同样是描述自己做过的项目，如何让我的经历写得与众不同、独具特色，从而一下子吸引读者的眼球，为自己的留学申请加分呢？</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><br />大部分科研经历的写作都存在着一个误区：认为只是一板一眼地把整段经历陈述完整即可；其实，这种&ldquo;流水账&rdquo;式写作方式会不可避免地导致个人陈述千篇一律、失去高光点。相反，成功的科研经历不仅能够凸显申请项目要求的个人能力和技能，还能体现个人独特的思考和对相关学科、行业的认识，甚至能够通过清晰的写作思路侧面体现申请者的逻辑思维能力。</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><br />今天<strong>#心动的文书#</strong>栏目，将与大家探寻如何将科研经历写得与众不同，从而使personal statement脱颖而出。</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="h1">方法一：从&ldquo;项目动机&rdquo;入手，展现一个独特的&ldquo;我&rdquo;</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">许多科研经历的写作急于向读者展开大量细节，但却缺乏一个优秀的项目动机作为叙述的铺垫。事实上，<strong>它不仅起着引入的作用，还能够显示申请者学习该专业的决心、对项目开展背景的深入理解、或者对某项技术相关应用的个人探究。</strong></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><strong><span style="color: #1890ff;">Before</span></strong></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">During my undergraduate period, I was involved in a series of research projects. Among them, the project named Network Public Opinion Analysis System Based on Big Data Technologies impressed me deeply. <span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【点出项目标题】</span>It was designed to tell actual users from online water armies based on user comments and data of user characteristics on the popular Chinese social media platform.<span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【阐述项目旨在】</span> Throughout this project, I gained proficiency in semi-supervised cooperative training algorithms and harvested precious insights into data collection, analytics, and forecasting.<span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【技能、能力方面的收获】</span>...</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>After</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">In the relentless pursuit of academic excellence and progress, I eagerly attempted to involve myself in a wealth of research projects. <span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【增加段首句的铺垫】</span>One of them worth noting, Network Public Opinion Analysis System Based on Big Data Technologies, aimed to differentiate actual users from online water armies (user groups paid to post comments online) based on user comments and data of user characteristics on the popular Chinese social media platforms. <span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【为&ldquo;网络水军&rdquo;的翻译增加解释，便于理解】</span>As an ordinary netizen, I found the pervasive online We-media comments for mischievous ends haunted me so much, that I felt obliged to unmask them using modern big data techniques, weakening the influence of such malicious gossips. <span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【加入对项目动机的描述：由于自身作为一名网民观察到一些心怀鬼胎的自媒体言论对网络使用者的巨大影响，因此希望利用先进的大数据技术去辨别网络水军和普通用户的发言，弱化这种负面影响】</span>Throughout this project, I gained proficiency in...</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>Analysis</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">原文仅是对科研项目做了平铺直叙，从项目名字、旨在、到收获、步骤，<strong>显得呆板无趣，缺乏重点，也没有体现申请者个人的主观看法和申请意愿。</strong></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">而修改后的版本则通过<strong>加入了对项目动机的阐述</strong>，向读者展示申请者是如何不断尝试着将大数据科技融入生活中的真实场景中的。这不仅体现了申请者平时点滴的思索和积累，也侧面<strong>反映出其在选择参加科研项目时明确的目标性</strong>（想要学习大数据科学），勾勒出一个真实而活跃的&ldquo;我&rdquo;，给读者留下深刻印象。其实同一科研主题的项目内容往往相近，但最吸引人的总是一些独特的personal opinions。</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="h1">方法二：抛弃无脑列举，采取问题导向型叙述模式</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">许多同学想要尽可能地穷举科研经历完成的过程，却导致整段经历显得冗余无序，失去逻辑。<strong>事实上，一段成功的科研经历应当有一个明确的框架作为骨干，而问题导向型框架就是一个不错的选择。</strong></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>Before</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">Based on the fact that infants are active and cannot be forced to intervene, I designed a set of non-contact infant vision screening devices, and came up with a diopter measurement algorithm based on medical image processing. <span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【阐述项目主旨：设计出一套无接触式婴幼儿视力筛查装置，并在此基础上提出一种基于医学图像处理的屈光度测量算法】</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">I first carried out image cutting, preprocessing, noise removal, lens distortion correction, spot positioning and other steps. Then I implemented image fitting and data training based on machine learning, and finally got the diopter detection results. <span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【列举项目的每个步骤，以及涉及的相关工具和技术】</span>...</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>After</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">On account of the characteristics of infants, I designed a set of non-contact infant vision screening devices, and proposed a diopter measurement algorithm based on medical image processing. <span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【阐述项目主旨】</span>Throughout the whole period, what challenged me most was the image pre-processing and fitting process I went through.<span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【揭示整段经历中碰到的最大的两个困难：预处理和图像拟合】</span> Confronted with the problems like lens distortion and ambient noises, I perused large volumes of related literature to get acquainted with noise-eliminating algorithms like binarization, gray processing, and filtering, along with lens-distortion-correction algorithms like image dilation. <span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【针对第一个问题图像预处理（镜头畸变和环境噪点等），阅读文献学习图像处理技术来解决】</span> Thanks to the in-depth literature studying, I gained a down-to-earth perception of principles and rectification of environmental interference. <span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【阐述阅读文献阶段获得的感悟和提升】</span>As for the bottlenecks I experienced during image fitness, I followed the supervisor&rsquo;s advice to adopt machine learning algorithms for model construction and training.<span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【针对第二个问题图像拟合，使用ML算法来构建和训练模型】</span>Upon completing this project, my problem-shooting skills, autonomic learning abilities, and quantitative abilities were significantly improved from the process ranging from discovering health problems, designing reasonable schemes, establishing hardware devices, and developing software.<span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【阐述第二阶段获得的提升和感悟】</span>...</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>Analysis</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">原文只是平淡地将整段经历从头到尾地按步骤呈现了出来，完整地罗列了每个步骤，却<strong>没有指明项目最具挑战性的部分，也没有强调克服困难的过程</strong>，导致整段经历显得平平无奇。</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">修改后的版本则将整段经历的结构按所遇到的两大困难分为两个部分，分别阐述是如何解决这两个问题的，以及这一过程给自己带来的感悟和提升。<strong>这种叙述结构使得科研经历显得主次分明、逻辑清晰，将更多的笔墨聚焦在申请者的解决问题能力上。</strong></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span class="h1">方法三：展望项目相关的实际应用场景，画上点睛之笔</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">比起直接在陈述完项目成果和感悟后就草草收尾，<strong>适当展望一下这项研究未来的进步空间，以及其潜在的应用价值</strong>，能够帮助申请者体现自身的学术素养，为科研经历的撰写增色不少。</p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>Before</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">...After the hardware device and algorithm platform were built, I collected visual information of nearly 100 people for testing, which showed high diopter accuracy. <span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【阐述最终项目成果】</span>This project gave me rich inspiration concerning health data science.<span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【引发我想去学习健康数据科学】</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>After</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">After the hardware device and algorithm platform were completed, I collected visual information from nearly 100 people for testing and attained a high diopter accuracy, winning the third prize for the College Students&rsquo; Innovative Entrepreneurial Training Plan Program. <span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【强调项目获得的奖项】</span>This project endowed me with insightful opinions concerning health data science. <span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【引出对健康数据科学新的认识】</span>On one hand, I firmly believe that the combination of medical image processing technology and data science will benefit minority groups by helping solve intractable traditional medical problems via information technology, especially disease prevention and treatment. <span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【一方面，展望图像处理技术和健康数据科学对于少数群体医疗问题的强大作用，尤其是疾病的预防和治疗】</span>On the other hand, I will attach more importance to healthcare issues with keen observations and constantly seek solutions from data analytic perspectives.<span style="background-color: #f9f09f;">【另一方面，表示自己未来会继续关注健康数据科学在医疗问题方面的应用，强调未来学习这个专业的决心】</span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><span style="color: #1890ff;"><strong>Analysis</strong></span></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">原文只是简单描述了最终取得的成果作为结尾，读起来略微显得些许潦草。而修改后的版本则适当扩充了一些自己对于健康数据科学在医疗领域实用性的见解，侧面体现自身对该行业的兴趣和认识，并<strong>再次强调了自己想要学习申请专业的motivation，紧扣个人陈述的主题。</strong></p> <p style="text-align: justify;">&nbsp;</p> <p style="text-align: justify;"><img style="width: 808px; 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